雅思寫作11/10

 



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The line graph illustrates the monthly sales of four bakery products—baked bread, croissants, cupcakes, and biscuits—at a bakery shop in 2022.

Overall, the sales figures for these products ranged between 30,000 and 80,000 dollars throughout the year. While biscuits showed a gradual decline, croissants experienced a steady increase. In contrast, the sales of cupcakes and baked bread remained relatively stable over the same period.

In more detail, biscuits started as the second most popular product in January, with sales of around 60,000 dollars. However, their sales continued to fall gradually and ended the year at approximately 40,000 dollars, the lowest among the four items. Conversely, croissant sales rose consistently each month, doubling from about 40,000 in January to nearly 80,000 in December, making it the top-selling product at the end of the year.

Both cupcakes and baked bread maintained stable sales trends, though at different levels. Cupcakes consistently achieved the highest figures throughout most of the year, averaging around 80,000 dollars, while baked bread stayed close to 40,000. The gap between the two remained roughly 40,000 dollars during 2022.



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